Susan the princess. By Ellie

Long ago there lived a young girl called Susan. She was a sweet girl. One day Susan made a sandwich to go to the zoo. When she arrived she saw a strange thing. A Hyena was roaming around in a miserable mess. It was grey, hairy and rude. Wandering towards it, Susan stepped on a wand and fell into a hole that appeared from nowhere. As soon as she fell, she got up and climbed up a mysterious wall and saw a huge castle. Walking inside, she found a beautiful green dress with a crown and put it on so she could become a princess.

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2 thoughts on “Susan the princess. By Ellie

  1. Anonymous says:

    Wow you have done really well on 100 words! Fantastic work Ellie!
    Aimée

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  2. bwilliams1232013 says:

    You came a long way in 100words Ellie, from making a sandwich to being a princess. Well done.

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