There once lived a hyena who had dark, thick, grey skin. This hyena, who was called Harold, wasn’t just any kind of hyena. Harold was an enthusiastic, sporty hyena who one day would climb Mount Massive. To accomplish this feat was a dream for Harold; he would rather climb mount massive than be a hero who saved the whole wide jungle (which was pretty big).Harold was often miserable as his brother kept saying he`d never do it. So one day he decided to pack a cheese sandwich and climb the great mountain and guess what he did the tiring job.
I really like your story. Great use of semi-colon. Well done Joseph
Aimee
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