Jeff,who was 123, had gone in the bath. He came out and thought to himself did I like riding uni……rocks???? Then he said to himself YEH!!😁😁😁!!!! Jeff disant always go in the bath but when he does he puts shades on but not normal shaded what make you DREAM! So he went in again and the went into water
AND DROWNED
THE END
Nicely structured piece of writing. I love the way you used types of animals in interesting places. I also like the way that you have used your imagination to write this
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Nice I liked the way you used your imagination
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